A Manuscript Assessment that Actually Helps

Story Tree Assessment

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You Don’t Need a Manuscript Assessment,

You Need Support

For most writers, revision is the hardest part of writing a novel.

I don’t mean editing—moving words around on the page—I mean revision: unflinching analysis of what’s working and what’s not.

It does you no good to learn your book’s structure is all wrong and you have no character arc if you don’t know how to fix those things.

Knowing the problem without the solution leads to overwhelm, confusion, and, often, abandoning your book.

That’s why a Story Tree Assessment is so much more than a feedback letter.

Story Tree Assessment

A thorough assessment of your book to help you get an accurate understanding of the state of your book, find ways to strengthen your novel, and create a plan for moving forward.

  • Comprehensive assessment of your detailed outline to evaluate theme, character arc, plot, pacing, worldbuilding, and logic

  • Read of selected portions of your manuscript to ensure your book meets genre conventions, progresses well, and has no major craft issues

  • Focused feedback letter highlighting where your story is kicking ass, what needs work, and what you might be missing

  • Three-hour private coaching call to get into the nitty gritty of your book, work through plot holes, banish the doubt demons, and plan for your next steps

  • If you join the Rooted Writers Mentorship within two months of your Intensive, your first month is on me

What's included:

  • Whole-Story Evaluation - A comprehensive analysis of every structural element of your book, just like you’re hoping for

  • Personalized Support - Space to ask for clarification, talk through your doubts, and ensure I really get your book, so you don’t feel uncertain whether I’ve given you the right feedback

  • Brainstorm Buddy - Since I’ll know your story, we’ll be able to fill those plot holes and discover new ideas without you having to explain everything

  • A Revision Plan - A personalized roadmap so you can know what to address first and how approach your revision

  • Piece of Mind - Writing a book is hard as hell, but with me by your side, you don’t have to do it all alone

What you'll experience:

Investment: Normally $1,900, but you pay the Mentorship price of only $1,400

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